Beatrice La Farge (ed.) 2017, ‘Ketils saga hœngs 38 (Framarr víkingakonungr, Lausavísur 3)’ in Margaret Clunies Ross (ed.), Poetry in fornaldarsögur. Skaldic Poetry of the Scandinavian Middle Ages 8. Turnhout: Brepols, p. 593.
Skelfr nú skegg á karli; skeika vápn gömlum;
frýr hann hjör hvössum; hræðiz faðir meyjar.
Brýnduz benteinar, svát bíta máttu
hölða hugprúða, ef þér hugr dygði.
Nú skelfr skegg á karli; vápn skeika gömlum; hann frýr hvössum hjör; {faðir meyjar} hræðiz. {Benteinar} brýnduz, svát máttu bíta hugprúða hölða, ef hugr dygði þér.
Now the beard is trembling on the fellow; weapons go askew for the old man; he blames his sharp sword; {the father of the maiden} [= Ketill] is afraid. {The wound-twigs} [SWORDS] were whetted so that they were able to bite courage-proud warriors, if courage had stood you in good stead.
Mss: 343a(57v), 471(56r-v) (Ket)
Readings: [1] nú: om. 471 [6] máttu: so 471, mátti 343a [7] hölða hugprúða: hölðum hugprúðum 471
Editions: Skj AII, 286-7, Skj BII, 307-8, Skald II, 163, NN §3289; FSN 2, 138, FSGJ 2, 179, Anderson 1990, 58, 107, 442; Edd. Min. 84.
Context: Framarr mocks Ketill’s futile attempts to wound him. In the saga this stanza is introduced by the words: Framarr kvað vísu ‘Framarr spoke a stanza’.
Notes: [All]: This stanza contains echoes of Ket 15, in which Ketill comments on the course of the battle against the first unwanted suitor (Áli Uppdalakappi) for the hand of his daughter: Ketill says there (l. 4) that the beard of his opponent is ‘coloured (with blood)’ and that his opponent is afraid: biðill meyjar hræðiz ‘the girl’s suitor is afraid’ (l. 8). — [3] hjör ‘sword’: Hjör is dat. sg. without ending of hjörr ‘sword’, beside dat. sg. hjörvi, the latter a new formation from the nom. (cf. ANG §§82.7 Anm. 4, 365 Anm. 2). — [5-8]: Several mss including 342ˣ omit ll. 5-6 and read: frýr hann hjör hvassan; | hræðiz nú faðir meyjar | at høggva hugprúðan, | því honum hugr ei dugir ‘he blames his sharp sword (acc.); the father of the maiden is now afraid to strike the courage-proud [man], because his courage does not support him’. — [5] benteinar ‘the wound-twigs [SWORDS]’: The sword-kenning benteinn is attested only in poetry here but occurs as the name of a man in Ív Sig 25/7II. — [6] máttu ‘they were able’: Ms. 343a has the reading mátti, which is 3rd pers. sg. pret. indic. of the verb mega ‘be able’. Since the subject of the sentence is the pl. benteinar ‘wound-twigs [SWORDS]’, eds either adopt the reading máttu (3rd pers. pl. pret. indic.) found in 471 and in 340ˣ (so Skj B and this edn) or emend mátti to the pret. subj. mætti ‘should have been able’ (Edd. Min.; Skald). Kock (NN §3289) adduces the pret. subj. dygði in the following long-line in support of an emendation to a subj. However, according to Nygaard (NS §§293-5) verb forms in the indic. are usual in dependent clauses introduced by svá at/svát, unless the main clause contains a negation, a question, an exhortation or a word meaning ‘worthy’ or ‘suitable’.
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